kiaxo Harry Maybe you should describe what is in the piture and add more detail. I like the part when the eel died. I like the way you said what is the girls name is.
kia ora Harry maybe you should put a description in there because I cant really tell what is going on. However I did like the slide where the person killed him because the slide looks really cool.
Hello Harry! My name is Sofiya and I'm a year 8 at Belfast school. I really like this slide. And those pictures are amazing! Where did you get them from? Also, maybe you could add some words? I couldn't quite get what was going on. Overall, good job! -Sofiya :)
kia ora harry you have done an amazing job on you slide show it is defiantly better then mine and you have done a great job like sofiya said you should add some words. :)
kiaxo Harry
ReplyDeleteMaybe you should describe what is in the piture and add more detail. I like the part when the eel died. I like the way you said what is the girls name is.
Kiaora harry coming in from ahipara school i really like your google slide maybe you could make it a bit longer with some words.
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ReplyDeletemaybe you should put a description in there because I cant really tell what is going on. However I did like the slide where the person killed him because the slide looks really cool.
Hello Harry!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Sofiya and I'm a year 8 at Belfast school.
I really like this slide. And those pictures are amazing! Where did you get them from? Also, maybe you could add some words? I couldn't quite get what was going on.
Overall, good job!
-Sofiya :)
kia ora harry you have done an amazing job on you slide show it is defiantly better then mine and you have done a great job like sofiya said you should add some words. :)
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