My Fairy Tale Writing

Once upon a time there was a poor boy and a poor mum, the mum and Jack had a cow whiter than a milk but the cow doesn't give milk. One day Jacks mum said go and sell the cow in the forest the boy said there is a wolf, but his mum forced him. On the way the wolf wanted to eat the boy and the white cow the boy was smart and the boy took a stick to hit the wolf. The wolf said “ give me your cow or I will gobble you and the cow all up” the wolf ran and took the cow the boy wacked the wolf on the back, the wolf shouted “ouuuuuuuuuuuuuchyyyyyyyyy”  The wolf ran with the cow pass a house, Jack went to ask for some directions he saw a gingerbread man running with a horse, dog, and the wolf and his cow. He ran behind them, the cow changed directions the wolf and Jack followed. The cow took them to a gingerbread house, the wolf started to run jack said run you scaredy dog the wolf ran and ran. When Jack wasn’t looking... a witch came  the witch told his broom to bring him inside. Jack said give me my cow and I will go forever the witch said I am going to keep you in the basement with your prisoner-mate. The prisoner mate was actually a girl. Hansel and Gretel said if the old witch say give me your finger give her a piece of bone instead. When the witch said give me your finger to all three of them Gretel was first then Jack then Hansel but.. Hansel forgot to give her a bone, the witch said you are too fat and took Hansel out of the basement with Gretel and Jack. Jack poured oil on the log and Gretel lit the fire the witch said where is the fire so I can put that fat boy in the cauldron. Gretel said move closer then you will feel it, once the witch moved closer Hansel, Jack and Gretel pushed her in and ate the witch. They lived there for 2 weeks then they had their adventure together but they wasn’t ready yet. On the way they decided to live in the witch's house together again. Jack said you guys wait here I am just going to sell my cow. He sold it to a boy who doesn’t have any name he gave him 5 beans he said who would sell a cow with your beans, the boy said it is not any bean it is a magic bean so they swapped. Jack showed Hansel and Gretel his magic beans and they ran outside to plant it, they said this is going to take for long.but when Jack turned back, he saw a big beanstalk. There was a girl called little red riding hood, she was on her way to her grandma’s house. But when she saw the beanstalk she followed it. It wasn’t a while till she got there. Gretel was outside they were fighting. Jack and Hansel stopped the fight and they went on their real journey with Jack's friends. They walked 1500 mtrs without drinking or eating then Jack planted a another beanstalk. One second ago they were half way on the beanstalk, they said will their be mythical creatures. When they got up and they saw a castle a big one. And they continued searching for food and water. After they went back down with a hurry Jack Hansel Gretel and Little red riding hood got an axe and chopped it down. The giant fell with a big THUMP! They clapped with excitement because they have killed the giant. Jack and his friends continued their  journey together again. The next day they saw a Lumberjack, the lumberjack said “I will protect you kids” the wolf was up the tree to jump on them… kabam, kapow the Lumberjack stabbed the  moma wolf in the stomach and they cooked the momma wolf for lunch and slept in momma wolf’s leather. The next day they still continued their journey with momma wolfs leather and made it into their leather jacket. They walked and walked till Little red said “you guys can stay at my grandma's house” Jack said awesome and his friends said too. When they got to Little red house, she thought that something was different the door was left open and the clothes that Little red’s grandma hanged was gone. When they went in it was silent for a second. They saw their grandma. (which was the wolf) The wolf said “Hi darling and who are these people and I know that boy he is Jack.” Jack started to think that is weird a little. The lumberjack said “when did you see him” the wolf said “my mother told me.” Jack said give me that knife and then he stabbed the wolf in the stomach and made a line to see what he ate. Inside the wolf's stomach was Little red’s grandma, Little red’s Grandma said thank you for saving me. They had wolf for desert and they all liked it. The next day they remembered to get some weapons. They remembered to be so careful with the weapons. On the way they saw nothing dangerous. They saw this volcano which didn’t erupt yet. There was a cave by the volcano they went in and when they went in they saw 2 creatures. 1 was a unicorn 1 was a dragon. Jack, Hansel and the Lumber jack went on the dragon. Little red and Gretel went on the unicorn. They flew to a castle, they had fun attacking the castle. They were playing hide-and-seek the dragon had to find them. Then they rolled in a field full of flowers they rolled then after they flied on their favourite mythical  creature. The mythical creature flew to a portal which led the mythical creature and all of them to another realm.